Guzaarish :)

Kabhi Kabhi lagta hai,
likhun toh kyu likhun,
kya likhane se meri
taqdeer badal jaaegi,
kya likhane se meri haton
ki lakire badal jaaegi,
Aye khuda…,
tu hai toh kyun hai,
kya tuze meri Dil ki ruswayi
nazar nahi aati,
kya tuze meri minnate
sunaai nahi deti,
lshq pane ki chahat karu
toh kyun karu,
kya usse manzil mil paaegi,
Chand khwab dekhun
toh kyun dekhu,
kya woh pure ho paaenge,
kya duniya ka mei akela
insaan hun joh har kadam
par thokare kha raha hai,
kya duniya ka har insaan
kati patang ki tarah hona
chahiye,
jiske khule asmaan
mei udne ke alawa kuch
armaan na ho?
Aye khuda,
tuzse shikayat karne toh bahut
sawal hai Dil me,
agar guzaarish karna munasib
hai, toh muze iss kaabil bana,
anjaam kuch bhi ho aant me,
magar me apni zindgi ki
Jung khud ladh sakun !!

ยฉ Nathprasad Dhanawat

PS: This is my second Urdu poetry. I hope you like it .. ๐Ÿ™‚

79 thoughts on “Guzaarish :)

  1. Well written in urdu… all answers to your question is Patience…
    For verily patience is a beautiful vehicle which will never let you down… neither in anyone’s eyes nor in anyone’s feet..
    Surely we will get what we want… and when we get everything we are done with our life… so life is all about having patience and struggling for what you want…
    Enjoy your day…
    If it was a fiction then.. I apologize you for a long comment…and my lecture.. nicely written in urdu.. but I’ll recommend you to write “tuze” as “tujhe”

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    1. Nothing related to me it’s purely fiction write up even I had to Google many Urdu words for understanding.. & it’s always my pleasure to listen lecture from people like u who always motivates me.. I am agreed with u Sana… !
      Thank you for the correction, I will keep it in mind & will write “tujhe” henceforth.

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  2. “เคœเฅ‹ เคญเฅ€ เคฒเคฟเค–เคพ เคนเฅˆ เคฆเคฟเคฒ เคธเฅ‡ เคœเคฟเคฏเคพ เคนเฅˆ.. เคฏเฅ‡ เคฒเคฎเฅเคนเคพ เคซเคฟเคฒเคนเคพเคฒ เคœเฅ€ เคฒเฅ‡เคจเฅ‡ เคฆเฅ‡เฅค”.. Reminding me of this song..
    ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. Damn relatable for a reason.!❤️
    Baarishon ka mausam jaane laga hai, lagta hai kuch guzarishein khuda ko ab manzur nahi,
    Likh bhi dun koi kahani aaj mei,
    Toh ho jayegi mukammal is par koi gurur nahi,
    Tadbeeron mei kisi ki tasveerein kaid kr rahi hun,
    Shayad taqdeeron mei use pane ka khawab dekh paun.❤️

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      1. Yeh why not letโ€™s share it.. itโ€™s a pleasure.. after all itโ€™s our mission ๐Ÿซ๐Ÿซ๐Ÿซ๐Ÿซ๐Ÿฐ๐Ÿฐ๐Ÿฐ ๐Ÿ˜

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  4. Oh god! Yaar too deep…and after a long time… I read ur post!!
    Us najar ki taraf matt dekho ,jo tumhe dekhne se inkar kare…duniya ki bhid me agar kisi ko dekhna hai ,? Toh khud ko dekho…. Jo sirf hai tumko chahe , aur tumhi se pyar kare!!!

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      1. True! Aaj kal samjhdar ho rahe ho…shayd..meri baton ka asar!! ๐Ÿ˜‰…sorry i was kidding! I m always here yaar..i read ur every post..but its ki i dont right comments….. Believe me..i have not even missed ur one blog! Keep writing amd lovi g urself !!๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„

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  5. “kya likhane se meri
    taqdeer badal jaaegi”

    Likhne se takdiir to ni
    Prr rotaa hua dil jarurr sambhall jaayega

    Aapke likhne see mujhee jarur khushii hogiii
    Likhtaa to hathh haii
    Prr
    Likhne pe majbur dil krtaa haiii

    Bhaut hii sundrr likhaa haii aapnee ND๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ˜Š

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    1. Ji itni achhi comment krne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya โค
      Even if is not fully related to my life, I appreciate your thought.. Dil likhne mazbur krta hai, aur aapki jesi comment padhne ke baad khush bhi ho jaata h .. so, thank you again & yes.. We will be writing for sure ๐Ÿ˜Š

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