Complexity :)

by Nathprasad Dhanawat, posted in poem

I’m in chaos these days,
listening my unfavorite songs,
the gloomy face doesn’t want to see in the mirror,
maybe some things are responsible for that, which were never expected to happen in past,
sometimes it haunts me deep down,
sometimes I see my soul dancing on mountains of happiness,
that’s how life works for me continuously,
And I’m taking uncertain swings endlessly..!!!

© Nathprasad Dhanawat

28 thoughts on “Complexity :)”

  2. Quite a well articulated poetic commentary on the unpredictability of life. However, I’d suggest you pay a little more attention to grammar and not use multiple punctuations (especially multiple exclamation marks- that’s one of my pet peeves). I hope you don’t mind- I’m a grammar nazi, so these little things piss me off pretty quickly 😀

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      1. You don’t have to be a ‘master’ poet. All you need to write poetry is a bit of observation and your thoughts☺
        It’s okay. English is my second language as well.
        Right grammar, I’ve realised, can’t be memorised. If you try to learn all those rules by heart, you’ll indubitably remain stuck in the rabbit holes of grammar instead of appreciating the beauty of language. Good grammar comes naturally when you read and write regularly. You’re a talented person and I’m sure you’ll rectify those little things pretty easily.

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