we live under the same Sky,
we weep under the same Sky,
but we belong
to different planets,
Perhaps I know,
I am your favourite star
you like to gaze every night,
you spend each night sitting in your window, gazing at me
& waiting for me to fall,
But I know, even if I fall for you,
you won’t catch me & neither I will reach you,
your home resides in the field of sugarcane,
Winter is falling high there,
And I am standing out my naked body shivering,
If I try to reach you, I will have to make slits over my body,
And I know I won’t survive
until I reach you,
So, I decided not to fall
But I can’t stop gazing at you,
And perhaps this is how our story begins & continues but never ends,
We will remain as strangers with hearts together..!!
Β© Nathprasad Dhanawat
…hi… I m back!! π
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Hello… Yeh toh khushi ki baat hai π welcome back π
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Haannnn ππ… Thank u..!!
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Beautiful poem β€
After a long pause, I'm back with a new post! Go check it out if you have time π
https://christysdiaryblog.wordpress.com/
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Thank you so much
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Beautifulπ touched xx
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Thanks sanidhyaa π
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oops ya got it wrong…
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Alright π
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What happened? Why are you so “π”?
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Because India lost the match yesterday π
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Oh yes! π
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ππ will see them in WC
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Sure sureπ
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of course …..
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Wow!
Absolutely beautiful β€
Especially the end ππ
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Thank you so much Didi π
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β€β€
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ππ
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Grtπ
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Thanks sandhyaa π
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Where u found my name?
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That’s magic π
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Heheπ
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ππ
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What a storyyy! Its awesome ππ
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Thank you Didi π I hope you’re fine
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Welcome bhai! Iβm totally fine.. tum kaise ho?
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Har Bhai kaa armaan hota hai kii .. uski behena khush rahe .. baaki doesn’t matter. π π
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Areyyy wahhh.. badi badi batein???
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apsee hii toh sikha hai sab π
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Ohhooooo π
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Yesπ
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Okay ππ
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wow so beautiful
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Thanks π
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I am serious.. Zadavar vgre kahi nahi
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alright π
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π
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Amazing Prasad.. Write a book man..!
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wah NEHA .. ankhin chadhav tu mala chanyacha zaadavarπππ
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Kharach lihi..
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Hoo nakii…. Ek divas .. apna time aaega π.. Thanks btw .. I hope paper chan jaat asnaar …
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Ayega ayega.. Me start kelai book mazha.. Mera time bass aya hi hain.
Paper masta arey.. Khup bhari jatay.. Ata languages done ahet.. Abhi main maths science social studies..
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ohh achha .. that’s really good π.. nd paper pan mast jataye, too good.. all the best for the next papers
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Thank you very much π
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You’re welcome Little girl ππ
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This is really very beautiful!
Lovely π
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Thank you so much.. π
PS: I know you π
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Haha π
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π
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Nice
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Thank you π
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Wow…. Some stories never end.
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Yes Bhai .. thank you so much
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Living in each other but still strangers nice
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Exactly
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Beautiful !
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Thank you so much dear π
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Amazing! Creatively expressed…keep it up
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Thank you so much ma’am..
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π
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This is profoundly beautiful!
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Thank you so much.. it went into the spam folder π
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Youβre welcome! No worries! π
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ππ
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Amazing !! Just loved it
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baubali davesana πππ Thank you so much π
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You’re welcome dear π
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okay dost .. I like ur email id π
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hahaha ;p Thank you
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ππ
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should i call it a poem?
whatever! it sounds really interesting
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Yes it is a poem. Thank you for your kind words
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Lovely creationπ
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Thank you Gargi
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Welcome
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Is there any writing contest?
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No.. right now .. btw what’s up?
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All great
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Good…
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Beautiful and heart touching story..
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Thank you mitra π
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My absolute pleasure π
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Wow Nath!! Hats off to your imagination and how beautifully you put it into verse! ππ
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Thank you so much Himanshi π
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Wow this is so amazing and sad π’
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Thank you Adi .. don’t be sad π
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π
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Beautiful poemπβΊβΊ
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Thank you πππ
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Beautiful one Prasad..!
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Thank you Neha π
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My pleasure Prasad..
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Thank you!π ππππππ²
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You’re welcome πππππ
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πππ
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But wHy? You’re most welcome…πππ
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Nargis is beautiful name soβ
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It’s really connected to me… It’s beautiful…πππ
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I like your name β
Thank you so much π
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Beautiful story!π With beautiful ending that is just another beginning
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Well thankeww for your kind words. . !! π π
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9 bje!πππ
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Hao ree .. kyu maut ka tamasha dekhna h teko Mera π
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Haan!π
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Gyi fir Tu π
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Lovely story mate βοΈπ―
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Thanks bro π
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Pleasure always for ur words mate π
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wahh g aj to wordpress par love ki barish ho rahi haiπππ…(kuch bhi ulta sidha bola na me apke nam ki supari de dyungi sameera koππ)
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Haan kahani Ghar gahar ki. . Jese sippi aur maahi ki πππ aur Arun ke Saath ki bewafaai ki .. me nhi darta ππ
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πππππ…sameera iska murder free me kroge ya pese leke
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ussee koi khaas shauk nhi hai jail jaanekaππ
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ham pura plan krke murder krengeππ…bas apka wp acnt hack krna pdega.ye comment delete krne ke liye.yaha proof h baki sab secret hi rkhengeπ
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Dekhate hai ππ
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wait an watchπ
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Never ending lovely story
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Thank you so much ma’am
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